Hi, In general the document looks fine but I do find the Introduction and Security Considerations to have a lot of overlap in what they talk about.
I think that could be consolidated by moving and merging all but the last paragraph of the Security Considerations to Section 1, and leave the Security Considerations to talk about security considerations _when implementing this draft_ (I personally prefer the more detailed text in the Security Considerations over the Section 1 text describing the same issues but I'm fine with whatever works) Paul
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