A few minor nits (which probably don't need to be fixed right now and might be better handled by the RFC Editor post-WGLC):
- The references to sections of RFC8446bis in the Introduction read weirdly to me. The source Markdown makes it clear that this is a failure of the renderer to produce consistent semantics, as direct RFC references produce [brackets] which can be read fine as either prose or parentheticals, while section references produce prose. I suggest manually encapsulating the references in (), so that it renders as "This document defines key establishment options for TLS 1.3 via the existing supported_groups (Section 4.2.7 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tls-rfc8446bis-14#section-4.2.7> of [RFC8446bis <https://tlswg.org/draft-ietf-tls-mlkem/draft-ietf-tls-mlkem.html#RFC8446bis> ]) and key_share (Section 4.2.8 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tls-rfc8446bis-14#section-4.2.8> of [RFC8446bis <https://tlswg.org/draft-ietf-tls-mlkem/draft-ietf-tls-mlkem.html#RFC8446bis> ]) extensions" (and similarly elsewhere section references are used as parentheticals, unlike e.g. paragraph 2 of section 4.2). - It's a little odd that the last paragraph of Section 5 refers to the "TLS Supported Groups registry", and then the next paragraph (start of Section 6) refers to the "TLS Named Group (or Supported Group) registry" while referencing Section 6 of RFC9847 which itself calls it the "TLS Supported Groups registry". Is there a historical reason for the "Named Group" variant, or can these all just be the same? Cheers, Jack On Wed, Jun 24, 2026 at 3:37 PM <[email protected]> wrote: > Internet-Draft draft-ietf-tls-mlkem-08.txt is now available. It is a work > item > of the Transport Layer Security (TLS) WG of the IETF. > > Title: ML-KEM Post-Quantum Key Agreement for TLS 1.3 > Author: Deirdre Connolly > Name: draft-ietf-tls-mlkem-08.txt > Pages: 10 > Dates: 2026-06-24 > > Abstract: > > This memo defines ML-KEM-512, ML-KEM-768, and ML-KEM-1024 as > NamedGroups and and registers IANA values in the TLS Supported Groups > registry for use in TLS 1.3 to achieve post-quantum (PQ) key > establishment. > > The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-mlkem/ > > There is also an HTML version available at: > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-tls-mlkem-08.html > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-tls-mlkem-08 > > Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at: > rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts > > > _______________________________________________ > TLS mailing list -- [email protected] > To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] >
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