Hi Scott,

I thought the document was easy to read and clear.  I have a few 
suggestions/corrections based on previous work with yocto and toaster.  
Unfortunately, I don't have the background to contribute to the missing managed 
build workflow.

Thanks
Dave

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Section 1.1. add to both lists (build mode and analysis mode)
 * see the recipes/packages that depend on a specific recipe/package
 * see recipes/packages that are required for a specific recipe/package
================

2.2 missing 'is'
In order to make it easy to run Toaster, a requirements file 'is' located in 
the root directory of Source Directory bitbake/ (e.g. 
poky/bitbake/toaster-requirements.txt).
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2.2 optional virtualenv
I don't use virtualenv, since I don't mind changing the system files.  You note 
that it is  optional which is correct, however you note that *after* the steps 
that describe virtualenv installation and usage.  Maybe you could modify and 
move the text as follow?...
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Once you complete the following optional steps, you can execute in a 
lightweight "virtual environment" with its own site directories that are 
optionally isolated from system site directories. The virtual environment has 
its own Python binary (allowing creation of environments with various Python 
versions) and can have its own independent set of installed Python packages in 
its site directories.
    Install virtualenv: virtualenv is a tool to create isolated Python 
environments by creating folders that contain all the necessary executables to 
use the packages that Python projects need.
    Create and activate a virtual environment:
         $ virtualenv venv
         $ source venv/bin/activate
...
======================

3.1.2 #4 The caveats about sqlite3 may suggest that toaster web browsing can't 
access the toaster data which is not correct - I do it daily. So I would 
slightly modify the caveats re sqlite to...
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Another example database server is sqlite3. With this server, you have the 
advantage of no configuration and an easy installation. Although a toaster 
web-browser session still has access through the web server hosted with the 
sqlite database, you do not have direct remote access to the database. Also, 
sqlite3 is slower as compared to mysql-server, and has no transactional 
support....

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3.1.2 #6
Fix typo: 
TOASTER_MANAGED = Trure

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Thanks!
Dave Lerner

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> MICHAEL
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> Subject: [Toaster] Review of Toaster manual needed by March 11
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Please have some feedback for the Toaster manual at
> http://www.yoctoproject.org/docs/1.8/toaster-manual/toaster-manual.html.  
> There are
> missing steps and information that I need.  The deadline for this review is 
> one week -
> March 11th.
> 
> Thanks,
> Scott
> 
> Scott Rifenbark
> Intel Corporation
> Yocto Project Documentation
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