Dave, Thanks for the feedback. I will get your changes in.
Best, Scott >-----Original Message----- >From: Lerner, Dave [mailto:[email protected]] >Sent: Friday, March 06, 2015 8:58 AM >To: Rifenbark, Scott M; Damian, Alexandru; Paul Eggleton; Reyna, David L >(Wind River); Barros Pena, Belen; Wood, Michael G >Cc: [email protected] >Subject: RE: Review of Toaster manual needed by March 11 > >Hi Scott, > >I thought the document was easy to read and clear. I have a few >suggestions/corrections based on previous work with yocto and toaster. >Unfortunately, I don't have the background to contribute to the missing >managed build workflow. > >Thanks >Dave > >================ >Section 1.1. add to both lists (build mode and analysis mode) > * see the recipes/packages that depend on a specific recipe/package > * see recipes/packages that are required for a specific recipe/package >================ > >2.2 missing 'is' >In order to make it easy to run Toaster, a requirements file 'is' located in >the >root directory of Source Directory bitbake/ (e.g. poky/bitbake/toaster- >requirements.txt). >================ > >2.2 optional virtualenv >I don't use virtualenv, since I don't mind changing the system files. You note >that it is optional which is correct, however you note that *after* the steps >that describe virtualenv installation and usage. Maybe you could modify and >move the text as follow?... >----------- >Once you complete the following optional steps, you can execute in a >lightweight "virtual environment" with its own site directories that are >optionally isolated from system site directories. The virtual environment has >its own Python binary (allowing creation of environments with various Python >versions) and can have its own independent set of installed Python packages >in its site directories. > Install virtualenv: virtualenv is a tool to create isolated Python > environments >by creating folders that contain all the necessary executables to use the >packages that Python projects need. > Create and activate a virtual environment: > $ virtualenv venv > $ source venv/bin/activate >... >====================== > >3.1.2 #4 The caveats about sqlite3 may suggest that toaster web browsing >can't access the toaster data which is not correct - I do it daily. So I would >slightly modify the caveats re sqlite to... >------------- >Another example database server is sqlite3. With this server, you have the >advantage of no configuration and an easy installation. Although a toaster >web-browser session still has access through the web server hosted with the >sqlite database, you do not have direct remote access to the database. Also, >sqlite3 is slower as compared to mysql-server, and has no transactional >support.... > >================== >3.1.2 #6 >Fix typo: >TOASTER_MANAGED = Trure > >================== > >Thanks! >Dave Lerner > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: [email protected] >> [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Rifenbark, >> Scott M >> Sent: Wednesday, March 04, 2015 10:29 AM >> To: DAMIAN, ALEXANDRU; Paul Eggleton; Reyna, David; BARROS PENA, >> BELEN; WOOD, MICHAEL >> Cc: [email protected] >> Subject: [Toaster] Review of Toaster manual needed by March 11 >> >> Hi, >> >> Please have some feedback for the Toaster manual at >> http://www.yoctoproject.org/docs/1.8/toaster-manual/toaster- >manual.htm >> l. There are missing steps and information that I need. The deadline >> for this review is one week - March 11th. >> >> Thanks, >> Scott >> >> Scott Rifenbark >> Intel Corporation >> Yocto Project Documentation >> 503.712.2702 >> 503.341.0418 (cell) >> >> -- >> _______________________________________________ >> toaster mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://lists.yoctoproject.org/listinfo/toaster -- _______________________________________________ toaster mailing list [email protected] https://lists.yoctoproject.org/listinfo/toaster
