Thanks for the feedback.  A PR is at 
https://github.com/google/certificate-transparency-rfcs/pull/332  Summary 
follows.


    * Section 10.4 has some messed up markdown around its Specification Required
    guidance.

Missing newline added.

    * Section 10.7 needs to name the sub-registry it's creating.  (If it's the
    title of the section, that should be made clear; the prose doesn't say.)

Name made explicit.

    * It should be clear that all of these are sub-registries of "Transport 
Layer
    Security (TLS) Extensions".  Either say that in each section (i.e., refer to
    the XYZ sub-registry of the "Transport Layer Security (TLS) Extensions"
    registry), or say in Section 10 that everything below is a sub-registry of 
that
    one.

Most of this section (10) is new CT registries; only the TLS Type and the URN 
sub-namespace are modifications of existing entries.  I changed section 10 to 
divide this into 10.1 and 10.2 with subjections.
 

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