BTW, the run-on fix is at 
https://github.com/google/certificate-transparency-rfcs/pull/340


On 7/29/21, 4:58 PM, "Salz, Rich" <[email protected]> wrote:

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        [Roman] The first two seem like trivial editorial fixes.

    Sorry I lost the original mail so responding here and explicitly CC'ing 
Erik.

    > [S1.3] [nit]

    >  * Consider expanding SCT and STH on first use.

    We fixed this in draft 40, thanks. It was more of a nit-picking nuisance 
than expected :)

    > [S4.2.1] [nit]

    > * The first sentence reads like a bit of a run-on sentence to me. Perhaps:

    Fixed, thanks!

    > [S10.1.2] [comment]

    > * Not to start a bikeshed, but "trans" strikes me a bit generic for direct
      registration under ietf:params (I'd think it meant "transport" before I
      thought of "transparency", for example :-).

    Yeah, we're not going to re-open that :)


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