It's probably not my place to propose patches to the documentation,
but use this, if you folks see fit.  Please let me know if I
shouldn't be sending patches to the list on such minor things.

- Removed remarks about the Turbine/Scarab Summit - that was in June
- the link just goes to the invitation page.  (Wasn't there some
documentation from the minutes of the summit that it could link to?)
- A bunch of nit-picky grammar changes.

Thanks,
Will Stranathan

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*** index.xml   2000/10/15 18:56:53     1.5
--- index.xml   2000/10/29 16:27:28
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*** 25,31 ****
   </p>
  
   <p>
!     A couple example web applications that can benefit from using
this framework
      include <link
href="http://www.restorationhardware.com/">e-commerce shopping
      cart systems</link>, Yahoo style <link
href="http://c.clearink.com/">Link Conservatories</link>
      and <link href="http://tracker.clearink.com/">project</link> /
<link href="http://scarab.tigris.org/">bug
--- 25,31 ----
   </p>
  
   <p>
!     A couple of example web applications that can benefit from
using this framework
      include <link
href="http://www.restorationhardware.com/">e-commerce shopping
      cart systems</link>, Yahoo style <link
href="http://c.clearink.com/">Link Conservatories</link>
      and <link href="http://tracker.clearink.com/">project</link> /
<link href="http://scarab.tigris.org/">bug
***************
*** 40,62 ****
   <p>
      Many commercial (and non-commercial!) software companies will
attempt
      to sell you an "Application Server", but what few people
realize is that
!     it is only half of the battle to creating a web application.
There is often
!     quite a lot of code that your engineers end up re-inventing the
wheel with
!     or grabbing various packages from all over the net with various
licenses
!     that you may or may not agree to. The point of Turbine is to
collect that
      code into one location and make it easy to create re-usable
components
!     (such as ParameterParsing, Database Connection Pools, Job
Scheduling, GlobalCaches,
      integration with other tools such as Castor, Velocity, etc...)
all under
      a <link href="license.html">license</link> (Apache) that allows
you to create
      useful websites for your customers without worrying about viral
code. Turbine
!     is not the end all answer, but it sure is a nice way to make
your development
      life easier.
   </p>
  
   <p>
!     This framework has an intended audience that is directed at web
engineers,
      not necessarily the web designers. By using this framework, it
is possible
!     for the web engineers to build intuitive high level systems for
the web
      designers to use, but the low level framework is strictly for
web engineers.
      Turbine is not a web application server. It is a tool for
building web
      applications. Your <link
href="http://java.apache.org/jserv/">servlet engine</link>
--- 40,62 ----
   <p>
      Many commercial (and non-commercial!) software companies will
attempt
      to sell you an "Application Server", but what few people
realize is that
!     an application server is only half of the battle to creating a
web application.
!     Engineers frequently re-invent the wheel or grab various
packages from all
!     over the net (with various licenses that you may or may not
agree to) just
!     The point of Turbine is to collect that
      code into one location and make it easy to create re-usable
components
!     (such as Parameter Parsing, Database Connection Pools, Job
Scheduling, Global Caches,
      integration with other tools such as Castor, Velocity, etc...)
all under
      a <link href="license.html">license</link> (Apache) that allows
you to create
      useful websites for your customers without worrying about viral
code. Turbine
!     is not the end-all answer, but it sure is a nice way to make
your development
      life easier.
   </p>
  
   <p>
!     This framework's intended audience is the web engineers,
      not necessarily the web designers. By using this framework, it
is possible
!     for the web engineers to build intuitive, high level systems
for the web
      designers to use, but the low level framework is strictly for
web engineers.
      Turbine is not a web application server. It is a tool for
building web
      applications. Your <link
href="http://java.apache.org/jserv/">servlet engine</link>
***************
*** 66,72 ****
  
   <p>
      <strong>Integration with Velocity and FreeMarker is well
defined and makes
!     doing applications using these tools painless for both the
developers and
      the web designers!</strong>
   </p>
  
--- 66,72 ----
  
   <p>
      <strong>Integration with Velocity and FreeMarker is well
defined and makes
!     writing applications using these tools painless for both the
developers and
      the web designers!</strong>
   </p>
  
***************
*** 84,90 ****
  
   <p>
      The reason why Turbine works so well is because it applies
object oriented
!     principles to the entire process of building a complex secure
web application.
      We try to follow the <link
href="http://www.javaworld.com/javaworld/jw-12-1999/jw-12-ssj-jspmvc.html">Model
      2 methodology</link> yet expand on it to encompass "View"
techologies other
      than just JSP as well as more mature methodologies such as
<link href="action-event.html">Action
--- 84,90 ----
  
   <p>
      The reason why Turbine works so well is because it applies
object oriented
!     principles to the entire process of building a complex, secure
web application.
      We try to follow the <link
href="http://www.javaworld.com/javaworld/jw-12-1999/jw-12-ssj-jspmvc.html">Model
      2 methodology</link> yet expand on it to encompass "View"
techologies other
      than just JSP as well as more mature methodologies such as
<link href="action-event.html">Action
***************
*** 97,113 ****
      has been developed by developers for developers. We are not
trying to sell
      you something that does not really work, instead we are trying
to solve
      (or do something about) the problems that our fellow developers
keep having
!     over and over again. Come be a part of the revolution!
!     <strong><font size="+1">Summit Meeting - June 19th,
2000</font></strong>
!  </p>
! 
!  <p>
!     In order to help foster development in Turbine as well as
Scarab,
!     <link href="http://www.collab.net/">Collab.Net</link> has
decided to host a Scarab/Turbine
!     Summit Meeting to disucss the development of Scarab as well as
Turbine.
!     This meeting will be an excellent introduction to using Turbine
with Velocity
!     as well as a chance to meet the developers. If you can make it,
<link href="http://scarab.tigris.org/summit_meeting.html">please
!     visit this site</link>.
   </p>
  
   </s1>
--- 97,103 ----
      has been developed by developers for developers. We are not
trying to sell
      you something that does not really work, instead we are trying
to solve
      (or do something about) the problems that our fellow developers
keep having
!     over and over again. Come be a part of the revolution!    
   </p>
  
   </s1>
***************
*** 130,137 ****
          directory. We pride ourselves in our documentation of the
methods. The
          code is also very well documented.</li>
      <li>
!         A <link href="getting-started.html">Getting Started</link>
document has been
!         created that explains how to setup a Hello World Screen as
well as many
          of the re-usable classes that are included with the
framework.</li>
      <li>
          The <link href="fsd.html">functional specification document
(FSD)</link> should
--- 120,127 ----
          directory. We pride ourselves in our documentation of the
methods. The
          code is also very well documented.</li>
      <li>
!         A <link href="getting-started.html">Getting Started</link>
document that has been
!         created explains how to setup a Hello World Screen as well
as many
          of the re-usable classes that are included with the
framework.</li>
      <li>
          The <link href="fsd.html">functional specification document
(FSD)</link> should
***************
*** 155,165 ****
          There is a <em>turbine/examples/</em> directory that gives
starter examples
          on how to integrate Turbine with other tools such as
Velocity and FreeMarker.</li>
      <li>
!         If you are looking how to integrate Velocity with Turbine
there is
          <link href="velocity-site.html">documentation</link>
          on how the VelocitySite interfaces work.</li>
      <li>
!         We have a feature to do event based form data handling in
Actions. It is
          called <link href="action-event.html">Action Event</link>
and is very powerful.</li>
      <li>
          We have a set of <link href="code-standards.html">coding
conventions</link>
--- 145,155 ----
          There is a <em>turbine/examples/</em> directory that gives
starter examples
          on how to integrate Turbine with other tools such as
Velocity and FreeMarker.</li>
      <li>
!         If you are looking for how to integrate Velocity with
Turbine there is
          <link href="velocity-site.html">documentation</link>
          on how the VelocitySite interfaces work.</li>
      <li>
!         We have a feature to do event-based form data handling in
Actions. It is
          called <link href="action-event.html">Action Event</link>
and is very powerful.</li>
      <li>
          We have a set of <link href="code-standards.html">coding
conventions</link>


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