Looks good to me, but it's all broken.  I'd send it to Jon as an
attachment.

Will Stranathan wrote:
> 
> It's probably not my place to propose patches to the documentation,
> but use this, if you folks see fit.  Please let me know if I
> shouldn't be sending patches to the list on such minor things.
> 
> - Removed remarks about the Turbine/Scarab Summit - that was in June
> - the link just goes to the invitation page.  (Wasn't there some
> documentation from the minutes of the summit that it could link to?)
> - A bunch of nit-picky grammar changes.
> 
> Thanks,
> Will Stranathan
> 
> Index: index.xml
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /products/cvs/turbine/turbine/xdocs/index.xml,v
> retrieving revision 1.5
> diff -d -c -r1.5 index.xml
> *** index.xml   2000/10/15 18:56:53     1.5
> --- index.xml   2000/10/29 16:27:28
> ***************
> *** 25,31 ****
>    </p>
> 
>    <p>
> !     A couple example web applications that can benefit from using
> this framework
>       include <link
> href="http://www.restorationhardware.com/">e-commerce shopping
>       cart systems</link>, Yahoo style <link
> href="http://c.clearink.com/">Link Conservatories</link>
>       and <link href="http://tracker.clearink.com/">project</link> /
> <link href="http://scarab.tigris.org/">bug
> --- 25,31 ----
>    </p>
> 
>    <p>
> !     A couple of example web applications that can benefit from
> using this framework
>       include <link
> href="http://www.restorationhardware.com/">e-commerce shopping
>       cart systems</link>, Yahoo style <link
> href="http://c.clearink.com/">Link Conservatories</link>
>       and <link href="http://tracker.clearink.com/">project</link> /
> <link href="http://scarab.tigris.org/">bug
> ***************
> *** 40,62 ****
>    <p>
>       Many commercial (and non-commercial!) software companies will
> attempt
>       to sell you an "Application Server", but what few people
> realize is that
> !     it is only half of the battle to creating a web application.
> There is often
> !     quite a lot of code that your engineers end up re-inventing the
> wheel with
> !     or grabbing various packages from all over the net with various
> licenses
> !     that you may or may not agree to. The point of Turbine is to
> collect that
>       code into one location and make it easy to create re-usable
> components
> !     (such as ParameterParsing, Database Connection Pools, Job
> Scheduling, GlobalCaches,
>       integration with other tools such as Castor, Velocity, etc...)
> all under
>       a <link href="license.html">license</link> (Apache) that allows
> you to create
>       useful websites for your customers without worrying about viral
> code. Turbine
> !     is not the end all answer, but it sure is a nice way to make
> your development
>       life easier.
>    </p>
> 
>    <p>
> !     This framework has an intended audience that is directed at web
> engineers,
>       not necessarily the web designers. By using this framework, it
> is possible
> !     for the web engineers to build intuitive high level systems for
> the web
>       designers to use, but the low level framework is strictly for
> web engineers.
>       Turbine is not a web application server. It is a tool for
> building web
>       applications. Your <link
> href="http://java.apache.org/jserv/">servlet engine</link>
> --- 40,62 ----
>    <p>
>       Many commercial (and non-commercial!) software companies will
> attempt
>       to sell you an "Application Server", but what few people
> realize is that
> !     an application server is only half of the battle to creating a
> web application.
> !     Engineers frequently re-invent the wheel or grab various
> packages from all
> !     over the net (with various licenses that you may or may not
> agree to) just
> !     The point of Turbine is to collect that
>       code into one location and make it easy to create re-usable
> components
> !     (such as Parameter Parsing, Database Connection Pools, Job
> Scheduling, Global Caches,
>       integration with other tools such as Castor, Velocity, etc...)
> all under
>       a <link href="license.html">license</link> (Apache) that allows
> you to create
>       useful websites for your customers without worrying about viral
> code. Turbine
> !     is not the end-all answer, but it sure is a nice way to make
> your development
>       life easier.
>    </p>
> 
>    <p>
> !     This framework's intended audience is the web engineers,
>       not necessarily the web designers. By using this framework, it
> is possible
> !     for the web engineers to build intuitive, high level systems
> for the web
>       designers to use, but the low level framework is strictly for
> web engineers.
>       Turbine is not a web application server. It is a tool for
> building web
>       applications. Your <link
> href="http://java.apache.org/jserv/">servlet engine</link>
> ***************
> *** 66,72 ****
> 
>    <p>
>       <strong>Integration with Velocity and FreeMarker is well
> defined and makes
> !     doing applications using these tools painless for both the
> developers and
>       the web designers!</strong>
>    </p>
> 
> --- 66,72 ----
> 
>    <p>
>       <strong>Integration with Velocity and FreeMarker is well
> defined and makes
> !     writing applications using these tools painless for both the
> developers and
>       the web designers!</strong>
>    </p>
> 
> ***************
> *** 84,90 ****
> 
>    <p>
>       The reason why Turbine works so well is because it applies
> object oriented
> !     principles to the entire process of building a complex secure
> web application.
>       We try to follow the <link
> href="http://www.javaworld.com/javaworld/jw-12-1999/jw-12-ssj-jspmvc.html">Model
>       2 methodology</link> yet expand on it to encompass "View"
> techologies other
>       than just JSP as well as more mature methodologies such as
> <link href="action-event.html">Action
> --- 84,90 ----
> 
>    <p>
>       The reason why Turbine works so well is because it applies
> object oriented
> !     principles to the entire process of building a complex, secure
> web application.
>       We try to follow the <link
> href="http://www.javaworld.com/javaworld/jw-12-1999/jw-12-ssj-jspmvc.html">Model
>       2 methodology</link> yet expand on it to encompass "View"
> techologies other
>       than just JSP as well as more mature methodologies such as
> <link href="action-event.html">Action
> ***************
> *** 97,113 ****
>       has been developed by developers for developers. We are not
> trying to sell
>       you something that does not really work, instead we are trying
> to solve
>       (or do something about) the problems that our fellow developers
> keep having
> !     over and over again. Come be a part of the revolution!
> !     <strong><font size="+1">Summit Meeting - June 19th,
> 2000</font></strong>
> !  </p>
> !
> !  <p>
> !     In order to help foster development in Turbine as well as
> Scarab,
> !     <link href="http://www.collab.net/">Collab.Net</link> has
> decided to host a Scarab/Turbine
> !     Summit Meeting to disucss the development of Scarab as well as
> Turbine.
> !     This meeting will be an excellent introduction to using Turbine
> with Velocity
> !     as well as a chance to meet the developers. If you can make it,
> <link href="http://scarab.tigris.org/summit_meeting.html">please
> !     visit this site</link>.
>    </p>
> 
>    </s1>
> --- 97,103 ----
>       has been developed by developers for developers. We are not
> trying to sell
>       you something that does not really work, instead we are trying
> to solve
>       (or do something about) the problems that our fellow developers
> keep having
> !     over and over again. Come be a part of the revolution!
>    </p>
> 
>    </s1>
> ***************
> *** 130,137 ****
>           directory. We pride ourselves in our documentation of the
> methods. The
>           code is also very well documented.</li>
>       <li>
> !         A <link href="getting-started.html">Getting Started</link>
> document has been
> !         created that explains how to setup a Hello World Screen as
> well as many
>           of the re-usable classes that are included with the
> framework.</li>
>       <li>
>           The <link href="fsd.html">functional specification document
> (FSD)</link> should
> --- 120,127 ----
>           directory. We pride ourselves in our documentation of the
> methods. The
>           code is also very well documented.</li>
>       <li>
> !         A <link href="getting-started.html">Getting Started</link>
> document that has been
> !         created explains how to setup a Hello World Screen as well
> as many
>           of the re-usable classes that are included with the
> framework.</li>
>       <li>
>           The <link href="fsd.html">functional specification document
> (FSD)</link> should
> ***************
> *** 155,165 ****
>           There is a <em>turbine/examples/</em> directory that gives
> starter examples
>           on how to integrate Turbine with other tools such as
> Velocity and FreeMarker.</li>
>       <li>
> !         If you are looking how to integrate Velocity with Turbine
> there is
>           <link href="velocity-site.html">documentation</link>
>           on how the VelocitySite interfaces work.</li>
>       <li>
> !         We have a feature to do event based form data handling in
> Actions. It is
>           called <link href="action-event.html">Action Event</link>
> and is very powerful.</li>
>       <li>
>           We have a set of <link href="code-standards.html">coding
> conventions</link>
> --- 145,155 ----
>           There is a <em>turbine/examples/</em> directory that gives
> starter examples
>           on how to integrate Turbine with other tools such as
> Velocity and FreeMarker.</li>
>       <li>
> !         If you are looking for how to integrate Velocity with
> Turbine there is
>           <link href="velocity-site.html">documentation</link>
>           on how the VelocitySite interfaces work.</li>
>       <li>
> !         We have a feature to do event-based form data handling in
> Actions. It is
>           called <link href="action-event.html">Action Event</link>
> and is very powerful.</li>
>       <li>
>           We have a set of <link href="code-standards.html">coding
> conventions</link>
> 
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