On Sun, 2006-12-11 at 02:29 -0500, Karl Guertin wrote: > After two months worth of comments, I've rewritten the 20 minute wiki > tutorial. > > http://docs.turbogears.org/1.0/Wiki20/Page1 > > The primary enhancement is that I've added contextual lines in the > examples, which will hopefully reduce the confusion over where to > insert stuff.
It is much better now, very good job! Some thoughts from looking over it: - the old comments are still there, which are now out of sync with the doc, so they should be trimmed/deleted - the database still uses unicode, so the code as is will fail on mysql ( or does for me ). I think it would be better to change those to plain strings so that it will work out of the box on other RDBMS - perhaps a demo of the tg-admin sql sql command would be good before the sql create, that helped me understand what was going on when I was first exposed to object-relational mappers - maybe a link to or example of exactly how one makes the database and dev.cfg edit would be useful for beginners. i can write that up for mysql if you'd like - could the command prompts have a fully path name before them or something to help people know which dir they should be in for issuing commands? - the use of std.url produces a warning from CherryPy about it being deprecated Thanks for all the work you put into that Karl. Iain --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "TurboGears" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/turbogears?hl=en -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
