On Mon, 2010-03-22 at 16:03 -0400, Dea Million wrote: > Anyway, I just did another version. Comments anyone?
> http://homepage.mac.com/deazigns/bike-jersey-3.png Circle around the CoF on Right Side is too similar to the background or vice versa. If I try to imagine how this will end up with a person in it, I doubt the logo-type on the arms will work well (kinda cylindrical surface, bend, wrinkled). "10.04 Lucid Lynx" needlessly ties this to the release version (more so than just the lynx as such). People not familiar with Ubuntu will have no clue what that is about. The CoF as eye would fit a robot, but appears to be problematic here regarding style (rough splashy shape vs clean geometric shapes) and perspective (side vs what rather suggests frontal). This approach to the lynx could be great, strong, wild, fast, but you should try to make the cat more recognizable. Thinking of the composure of a racing cyclist, the back panel might actually be the better canvas. Thank you for working on this! -- Thorsten Wilms thorwil's design for free software: http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ -- ubuntu-art mailing list [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
