In this patch I've tried changing the wording a bit to concentrate on
the actual content of the help page. Is it any better?

** Changed in: ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
     Assignee: (unassigned) => M.P. Rommedahl (lhademmor)
       Status: Confirmed => In Progress

** Attachment added: "reworded intro"
   http://launchpadlibrarian.net/9888305/intro.diff

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Intro paragraph in "Advanced topics" section doesn't really help
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/144783
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