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Factual error (?): Ubuntu or Canonical on page 118
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Bug description:
Revision number:  Revision date: -- :: -
Chapter and page number: 5, page 118
Type: factual error

Margin note on page 118:
"Every  months, Ubuntu releases a new version of the operating system."

For me it sounds strange that Ubuntu is releasing something. For me Ubuntu is 
released by someone - namely Canonical. I would suggest: "Every 6 months, 
Canonical releases a new version of the Ubuntu operating system."

The same applies analogously to the third sentence: 
"Every four normal releases—or  months—Ubuntu releases a Long Term Support 
(LTS) release."
My suggestion:
"Every four normal releases—or  months—Canonical releases a Long Term Support 
(LTS) Ubuntu release."



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