On 2009/04/10, at 10:43 AM, <[email protected]>
<[email protected]> wrote:
Attached is the third draft of FPLA 2010. It includes suggestions
by Armstrong, Hooper, Jakuba, and Steele.
<FPLA-4-9.pdf>
Dear Gene,
I'm having trouble with the first five words, 'To regulate interstate
and facilitate global commerce …' as they simply don't make much
sense to me. Maybe they are written in legalise, a language with which
I am unfamiliar.
Do you think we could try something like: 'To regulate and to
facilitate interstate and global commerce by preventing the use of
unfair or deceptive methods of packaging or labeling of consumer
commodities distributed in such commerce.'
Cheers,
Pat Naughtin
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Geelong, Australia
Phone: 61 3 5241 2008
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