A few typos in the letter:
The symbol for kilowatt hour is kW·h, not kWh.
The word "degree" is misspelled as "dgree".
"The articles states" is ungrammatical. One of the s's is extra.

Also, the section about radiation units should mention the becquerel. I heard 
a story about Fukushima this morning on NPR, and the reporter seemed to 
confuse radioactive matter with radiation. I've heard statements such 
as "there are so many sieverts of radiation in the air", which doesn't make 
sense - there's nothing to measure in sieverts unless there's a biological 
body absorbing the radiation. Radiation can be measured in becquerels per 
square meter, or an amount of radioactive matter can be measured in 
becquerels.

Pierre

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