Thank you, I found the pesky typos (it was one article)

They plead "poverty" on special symbols (it's 2011.  I don't understand why 
they 
don't have the extended ascii set available, but they claim they don't).  
Therefore I wasn't really too bothered by the lack of a mid-dot in kW·h or the 
lack of a degree symbol in temperatures.  Per SP811, section 6.1.5, note 2, the 
space may be omitted from kW h per ISO31-0, or other cases where it does not 
lead to ambiguity, although SP811 recommends the dot or space always be used.  
I 
don't think AP would use "kW h" and can't use "kW·h."  I decided "kWh" was good 
enough although others can recommend they use "kW h" if they wish.  


I omitted the becquerel because the AP article does not list the curie.  I am 
hoping they will use SP 330 as a reference and I don't have to explain the 
entire SI to them.  I am focusing on what I consider their  significant 
mistakes 
that they have the ability to correct.  I'm not sure (but I have VERY little 
experience in measuring ionizing radiation) that measuring the radiation in 
becquerels is entirely (or reasonable) equivalent as it ignores the amount of 
energy per particle (and for gamma and x-rays, the probability that the 
particle 
will actually be absorbed).  The energy that would be absorbed can be measured 
in grays by introduction of a suitable sensor, and if the radiation is 
characterized, the "damage points" in sieverts can be calculated.  (Anyway, we 
would need Jim to write a better paragraph as I don't consider myself competent 
on measurement of ionizing radiation.)



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From: Pierre Abbat <[email protected]>
To: U.S. Metric Association <[email protected]>
Sent: Thu, May 5, 2011 9:25:01 AM
Subject: [USMA:50431] RE: AP Styleguide 2009

A few typos in the letter:
The symbol for kilowatt hour is kW·h, not kWh.
The word "degree" is misspelled as "dgree".
"The articles states" is ungrammatical. One of the s's is extra.

Also, the section about radiation units should mention the becquerel. I heard 
a story about Fukushima this morning on NPR, and the reporter seemed to 
confuse radioactive matter with radiation. I've heard statements such 
as "there are so many sieverts of radiation in the air", which doesn't make 
sense - there's nothing to measure in sieverts unless there's a biological 
body absorbing the radiation. Radiation can be measured in becquerels per 
square meter, or an amount of radioactive matter can be measured in 
becquerels.

Pierre

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