Folks,

I've completed my review of draft-ietf-uta-tls-attacks-03. Fine work; it's ready to go to Last Call. Just a few nits, which I'm fine leaving until after Last Call:

Section 1: s/motivated/was one of the motivations for/

Section 2: Somewhere explain what the CVE numbers are.

Section 2.8: s/to define/the definition of/

Section 2.13: s/the integration of/when integrating into/

That said, a question, probably mostly for the chairs, but others can of course speak up if they have something to add: It seems to me that this document could probably wait until the BCP is also ready for Last Call because it might be good to review both documents together. Do you really want me to Last Call it now (and put a stake in the ground that you've gotten it done), or do you want me to hold off for a bit? I'm happy to proceed either way.

pr

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