Section 1, penultimate paragraph, says TLS 1.3 will obsolete this
document. It's not clear why, especially given that TLS 1.3 is likely
to have a lengthy time to be adopted, and won't contain
recommendations for other versions.

Section 2, bullet 3 seems to include STMP. It's unclear if this is in
fact correct.

2.1. We have "They are not in the scope of this document. We discuss
them under.." which seems wrong to me.

7.4 doesn't explain what the checks are that are required on points,
referring instead to an IKE document.

These are very minor complaints.

On Fri, Oct 24, 2014 at 8:21 AM, Leif Johansson <[email protected]> wrote:
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> Folks,
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