Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-uta-xmpp-06: Yes
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to http://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-uta-xmpp/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- This is important work. Thank you for doing it. I have a couple of points where I wasn't clear on the text, but they're nits. I'm not quite sure what this text: 3.3. Session Resumption In XMPP, TLS session resumption can be used in concert with the XMPP Stream Management extension; see [XEP-0198] for further details. means in a major section called "Recommendations". Good idea? Bad idea? Doesn't matter? It depends? I could read "can be used" as saying "it's physically possible", or "it's OK", so I thought I should ask. I'm fine with you not saying anything normative, but it seems like a thumbs up/down/sideways would be helpful, at a minimum. In this text: 5. Security Considerations The use of TLS can help limit the information available for correlation to the network and transport layer headers as opposed to the application layer. I'm guessing what "as opposed to" means. Is this saying The use of TLS can help limit the information available for correlation between the network and transport layer headers and the application layer. or something else? _______________________________________________ Uta mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/uta
