> On Feb 28, 2018, at 7:09 AM, Valery Smyslov <smyslov.i...@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> It seems to me that the new sentence is still too long and a bit hard to 
> parse.
> Is it possible to rephrase it? Something along the lines:
> 
>    For DANE TLSA policies, a JSON array of strings each
>    representing the RDATA of a single TLSA resource record as a space-
>    separated list of its four TLSA fields; the fields are in presentation 
> format 
>    (defined in RFC6698 Section 2.2) with no internal spaces or grouping 
> parentheses:
> 
> (hope this doesn't change its meaning).

Works for me.

-- 
        Viktor.

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