(i'm not so sure that anyone is following this group, all seem so wave-
y nowdays...)

I think i found the following minor issues with the draft spec of the
published version of "Google wave Conversation Model":

1) It would be better to number the chapters for facilitating
references.

2) chapter "Model"/"Document namespaces and validation", namespace for
manifest-documents:
  replace 'conversation' with 'conv'.

3) next chapter, "Documents"/"Blip Document", example blip document:
  <contributor> tag is not closed.

4) next 2 sections, the heading-levels of the same-named "Conversation
manifest document" chapters may be reversed.
It would be better to differentiate the first one by naming it as
"Conversation manifest document example", the same to the previous
section "Blip document example".

5) 4) same section, 2nd "Conversation manifest document", phrase
«Thread ids have no semantic meaning» should become «Thread ids have
no semantic meaning unless referenced by an in-line reply.»

6) chapter "Conversation manifest elements", //peer// element missing
a meaningful description.

7) chapter "Example Conversation", the phrase «The conversation
manifest has an id of "conversation" ...» may be better «The
conversation manifest has an id of "conv+root" ...»

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