Benny,

its been a long day for me so just a quick comment:

you have a lot of empty tags in the main frame, may be you should go through
the FP output and clean it up after the pages are generated.

the menu took an age to load, and looking at the source you have stuff in
there which doesn't need to be there [ and probably shouldn't ] and it is
also very very cluttered.

the menu itself I found a bit confusing, couldn't work out which  links were
working or not: if I clicked on another link the frame didn't change? or got
'page could not be displayed, and I  didn't like the way the 'pop up's'
obscured the rest of the menu, which probably contributed to my confusion/
and or the difficulty.

Didn't mind the colour scheme but it could be hard for some visitors, who is
your intended audience? if it is  a family sight remember the grandparents
who might be visually challenged.

Branding is important so when you look at your heading/title think
"corporate logo" type stuff - easily recognisable and readable!

hth

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From: "Benny" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
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Sent: Tuesday, December 03, 2002 11:09 PM
Subject: [wdvltalk] Re: Site Check please


> underlined text fixed ..I was in 2 minds about that because I dont have
that turned on in
> IE here so it doesnt affect me
>
> a slightly darker blue text now .....
>
> animated heading .....jury still out on that one
>
> the rest of the site ? or didnt you get that far ( hehehehe )
>
> Thanks matie
>
> benny
>
>
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> Sent: Tuesday, December 03, 2002 7:07 PM
> Subject: [wdvltalk] Re: Site Check please
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> : Hello Benny.
> :
> : Animated heading. Slightly dark blue text over light blue
> : background. Underlined text that is not hyperlinked.
> :
> : Sure-shot way
> : to send visitors away.
> :
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> : ----- Original Message -----
> : From: "Benny" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> : To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> : Sent: Tuesday, December 03, 2002 2:08 PM
> : Subject: [wdvltalk] Site Check please
> :
> :
> : > Hello fellow wdvlers,
> : >
> : > >From an Aussie downunder
> : >
> : > I would be pleased if you were able to check out my site
> : www.bennymid.com
> : >
> : > I have been a lurker in here for quite a while now (
> : possibly read years, its been that
> : > long )
> : >
> : > Please note that at the moment the site is hanging off the
> : end of a 56 K modem the server
> : > is running FreeBsd and is also the gateway for the house
> : .....
> : >
> : > The site needs JavaScript enabled and  Shockwave ...It
> : also runs a few cgi scripts and  is
> : > also framed
> : >
> : > It is firmly aimed at MICRO$OFT   IE  however it also
> : appears to work well with a number
> : > of versions of netscape as well .I have also tested it out
> : with Crazy Browser
> : >
> : > The forum is locked to members however your more than
> : welcome to join if you wish
> : >
> : > There is a feedback form there so your comments posted
> : through it would be appreciated .
> : >
> : > Email addresses are NOT HARVESTED
> : >
> : > There are a number of pages that are being developed on
> : the run however I thought that I
> : > may put it out to you kind folks for another point of view
> : >
> : > Overall comments as well as tech comments are all welcomed
> : ...
> : >
> : > Please don't hold back on negitive comments either ..... I
> : figure that I couldnt get a
> : > better group of people to give me constructive feedback
> : than the folks on here
> : >
> : > regards
> : >
> : > and TIA
> : >
> : > Benny
> : >
> : >
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