The page layout is nice, good colours, I just have a grumble about the logo.
I don't know if you did their logo, or had to use one they supplied, but as a one-time commercial artist I feel the typography is poor on that. The spacing between the characters in "FAMILY" is just plain bad and jumps out at the eye (well the trained eye anyway). Letters like "A" should be closer to the characters either side of them, "I" should get a little extra space. The L" and "Y" should be pushed closer together. It's called "Kerning." Of course this is only obvious because the spacing has been expanded on the whole word to stretch it, but even on "DENTISTRY" the last two letters should be closed up a little. Some graphics programs are OK at letter spacing, some you have to tell them when you want kerning turned on, not all fonts contain the information needed for auto kerning to happen, so generally when creating a logo you have to manually adjust the spacing to get just the right effect. To be honest, I don't even much like the juxtaposition of the two different fonts used for the "POUSSON" and the "FAMILY DENTISTRY", then a third different again underneath - all three kinds of fonts (display, serif and sans serif) mixed in one badly laid out block - 2 fonts should be enough for any chunk of text! Oh last grumble I don't think bolding the first character of "Our services" and "Schedule" works, I would bold the whole word or not at all. Just my opinion :-) Bj ____ � The WDVL Discussion List from WDVL.COM � ____ To Join wdvltalk, Send An Email To: mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Send Your Posts To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] To set a personal password send an email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with the words: "set WDVLTALK pw=yourpassword" in the body of the email. To change subscription settings to the wdvltalk digest version: http://wdvl.internet.com/WDVL/Forum/#sub ________________ http://www.wdvl.com _______________________ You are currently subscribed to wdvltalk as: [EMAIL PROTECTED] To unsubscribe send a blank email to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
