[EMAIL PROTECTED] on Wednesday, October 08, 2003 8:59 PM said:

: Thanks everyone for the helpful comments!
: 
: I was tinkering with it one last time before I submitted it for
: review (big mistake) and accidentally reverted the menu links to
: the beta testing stage.  They are all supposed to work! 
: Aaaaaaack!  Well, all the links work now if anyone has the
: patience to go through the complete site, I would appreciate it.

see comments below
 
: BJ, thanks for the constructive criticism of the logo.  I hate to
: admit it, but I came up with it.  I'll use your suggestions to at
: least get the kerning right and then go from there.

I do have to agree with BJ on at least the use of multiple 
different fonts.  One of the first things we learned in typography
is that less is more.  In my experience, it's best to have no more 
than two to three different fonts site wide.
 
: Erik, you really thought it was a joke?  That is disconcerting. 
: I would suggest the change to the client, but he has already
: printed material with the current url.  The surname "Pousson" is
: fairly familiar if you live in Louisiana.

In reference to his suggestion:
"http://www.doctorpoussonfamilydentistry.com";
My only comments are: Long, unwieldy, easy to misspell.  Not a good
URL. Short, provocative and easy to spell are the name of the game.
Given what you had to work with, I think your url is fine.
 
: Chris, you are right.  I'll get the "about" and "contact" links
: up a pixel or two.

I'm still seeing the 1px drop on both of the tabs at the top.
 
: Jenni, feel free to plagiarize!  I think I came up with the
: colors using "Color Schemer."  If I only had 10 programs I could
: take with me to an island, it would definitely be one of them.

Might I throw into the mix the suggestion of Tiger Color's "Color
Impact" http://www.tigercolor.com/. By far the best color tool 
I've used for any design application, but is especially well suited
for the web with v2 out now.  It even has a HTML color composer
that lets you create a color scheme and then apply it to a variety
of common web layouts.
 
: Jan, when you say the top right links look off balanced, are you
: meaning horizontally or vertically?
: 
: Thanks again everyone!

Will,

  I think the site looks very nice. It is calm and soothing, as it
should be for a dentist, bearing in mind the fact that so many
people are phobic.

  It displays well in Mozilla 1.5rc1 on Windows 2000. It works on
Unix (well, cygwin unix emu for windows anyway) in 'Links', but 
this does point out a few problems:
- images are used for links, but have no alt, which leaves me
driving blind.
- Links is a text browser that obeys table structure, but your
content is scrunched up (right column), so I assume there is some
issue with the table layout.

  Also, your pages don't validate, since they have no doctype, so
they are being served as tag soup to browsers, all normal caveats
apply.  If you force validation through a doctype override:
<http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A//www.poussonfamilydentistry.com/&doctype=HTML+4.01+Transitional&charset=ISO-8859-1&ss=1>
You still get quite a few errors.

  Also, there is a plain white linked image to the left of "About"
(shows up as [img] in "Links") that gives a 404 on the "forms.php"
page.

  I like the site, my only real beef is what I feel like is an 
overly gratuitous use of images where text could be utilized 
(especially in the navigation).  It makes keyboard navigation 
much more difficult, makes the site less accessible and takes
longer to download.

  All in all, Good effort!

regards,
Stephen Caudill
http://www.mechavox.com/



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