>  I was hopeing some of you could take a look at the
>  working copy and let me know what you think about
>  the look, feel and navigatability of it as it
>  stands.

I like the direction you're going.  Here are my quick & dirty comments
regarding appearance and navigability.


 - I'd move the "HOME" link to the menu bar with the other links.

 - I'd also choose a different color to indicate the selected link.  Not
pink; perhaps the green you are already using as an accent color.

 - I'd also suggest tying the site together by completing the gray rectangle
that is implied by the content areas.  IOW, a single gray rectangle
containing all the existing gray rectangles.

 - I'd also suggest you think about a different color for the page
background, though the black does not look bad at all.  I think black
backgrounds have gone out of style, so to speak, for commercial sites. This
is not a visual issue, but rather a market credibility issue.

 - In the animated graphic on the home page, I'd loose the scowling man.
First off, he's scowling; secondly, he really does look like stock art.  I
think web users are no longer impressed by stock images of models pretending
to be office workers, etc.

As I said at the start, though, I do like the direction you're going.  My
immediate impression when I went to your site was good.

HTH,
Steven Olson
Alyption Media Group
104 S. Pine Street, Suite C
Sandpoint, ID 83864

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