On 2011-06-24 22:59, Adam Barth wrote:
...
The new version includes Security Considerations, IANA Considerations,
and a completed references section. Feedback on the new Security
Considerations section would be much appreciated.
...
Editorial nits: the references section should cite Internet Drafts as
such; see
http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml3/reference.I-D.draft-ietf-hybi-thewebsocketprotocol-09.xml
and
http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml3/reference.I-D.draft-ietf-websec-mime-sniff-03.xml
(note you may want to short the anchors)
For the W3C references I recommend the format in
<http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/rfc2629xslt/w3c-references.html>:
<reference anchor='WD-cors-20100727'
target='http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-cors-20100727/'>
<front>
<title>Cross-Origin Resource Sharing</title>
<author fullname='Anne van Kesteren' surname='van Kesteren'
initials='A.'/>
<date year='2010' month='July' day='27'/>
</front>
<seriesInfo name='W3C Working Draft' value='WD-cors-20100727'/>
<annotation>
Latest version available at
<eref target='http://www.w3.org/TR/cors/'/>.
</annotation>
</reference>
<reference anchor='WD-html5-20110525'
target='http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-html5-20110525/'>
<front>
<title>HTML5</title>
<author fullname='Ian Hickson' surname='Hickson' initials='I.'/>
<date year='2011' month='May' day='25'/>
</front>
<seriesInfo name='W3C Working Draft' value='WD-html5-20110525'/>
<annotation>
Latest version available at
<eref target='http://www.w3.org/TR/html5/'/>.
</annotation>
</reference>
Best regards, Julian
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