Nitpicking:

What's currently there:

OpenSolaris is a modern UNIX operating system that provides a rich, coherent
platform for building and running applications. It offers a wealth of
features for virtually limitless
storage<http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/storage/>capacity,
comprehensive system
behavior <http://opensolaris.org/os/community/observability> analysis, and high
performance computing <http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/hpcdev/>.
OpenSolaris developers and partners enjoy the professional-grade
tools<http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/tools>,
automated test farm <http://opensolaris.org/os/community/testing/testfarm/>and
documentation <http://www.opensolaris.org/os/community/documentation>available
to them and feel the platform is the
*secret sauce* to their success.

OpenSolaris supports systems that use SPARC and x86 families of processor
architectures: UltraSPARC, SPARC64, AMD64, Pentium, and Xeon EM64T. For
supported systems, see the Hardware Compatibility
List<http://www.sun.com/bigadmin/hcl>.


OpenSolaris is distributed under an OSI-approved open source
license<http://www.opensolaris.org/os/licensing/opensolaris_license/>that
makes it free for everyone to use and modify.

Chris rewrite:

OpenSolaris is a UNIX operating system. It runs on a variety of hardware
platforms. It is distributed under the CDDL, an OSI-approved open-source
license. It is free to use and modify.

Everything else is either marketing fluff or needs to go in a "OpenSolaris
Features" or "OpenSolaris Supported Hardware" section.


Looking at the homepage now, I can't imagine why the ZFS section should even
stay. It may be a bullet under the "OpenSolaris Features" list, but it
shouldn't be at the top.





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