[Wesnoth-commits] r24136 - /website/start/1.4/template.html

[esr]

Author: esr
Date: Thu Feb 28 07:13:26 2008
New Revision: 24136

URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth?rev=24136&view=rev
Log:
Second draft incorporating IRC feedback.

Modified:
    website/start/1.4/template.html

Modified: website/start/1.4/template.html
URL: 
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/website/start/1.4/template.html?rev=24136&r1=24135&r2=24136&view=diff
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--- website/start/1.4/template.html (original)
+++ website/start/1.4/template.html Thu Feb 28 07:13:26 2008
@@ -74,8 +74,9 @@
 
 <dt><b>One brand new, all original campaign by an open-source luminary</b>
 </dt> 
-<dd><p>Eric S. Raymond, the &uuml;bergeek who wrote the foundation papers
-on open source, has a not-so-well-kept secret; he loves strategy
+<dd><p>Eric S. Raymond, the open-source &uuml;bergeek who wrote <a
+href="http://catb.org/~esr/writings/cathedral-bazaar/";>The Cathedral
+and the Bazaar</a>, has a not-so-well-kept secret; he loves strategy
 games. ESR joined our development team nine months ago, and in between
 contributing code and bugfixes he found time to write an all-new
 campaign for 1.4: <em>The Hammer of Thursagan</em>.</p></dd>
@@ -92,14 +93,15 @@
 unobtrusive cue sounds.  You can use drag'n'drop to move units.
 Mousewheels are supported.</p></dd>
 
-<dt><b>Victory no longer instantly ejects you from your game</b>
+<dt><b>You can now review scenarios, chat, and set options after victory</b>
 </dt> 
 <dd><p>You'll no longer get two modal dialogues full of checkbox
-options immediately after victory in a scenario and then be summarily
-ejected from the game.  Instead, there's just one summary popup, after
-which you'll be in a 'linger mode' that allows you to chat with
-friends and foes, use normal commands, change your options, and in
-general do anything except more battle actions.</p></dd>
+options immediately after victory in a scenario and then be instantly
+returned to the lobby (or, in campaigns, jumped to the next scenario).  
Instead, there's
+just one summary popup, after which you'll be in a 'linger mode' that
+allows you to chat with friends and foes, use normal commands, change
+your options, and in general do anything except more battle
+actions.</p></dd>
 
 <dt><b>The multiplayer collection has been revised and extended</b>
 </dt> 


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