Author: esr
Date: Thu Apr 23 18:16:46 2009
New Revision: 35136
URL: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth?rev=35136&view=rev
Log:
Some TODo entries have been done.
Modified:
trunk/data/campaigns/Delfadors_Memoirs/TODO
Modified: trunk/data/campaigns/Delfadors_Memoirs/TODO
URL:
http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/Delfadors_Memoirs/TODO?rev=35136&r1=35135&r2=35136&view=diff
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--- trunk/data/campaigns/Delfadors_Memoirs/TODO (original)
+++ trunk/data/campaigns/Delfadors_Memoirs/TODO Thu Apr 23 18:16:46 2009
@@ -98,17 +98,3 @@
campaign. If you make my suggested tweaks to Gate Between Worlds
and Portal of Doom, then I think it'll end up somewhat easier than
HttT.
-
-
-Finally, a couple style/grammar nitpicks:
-
-* Overture: Delfador's closing "Let's go!" is a bit cheesy and breaks
- the mood. Replace it with something more formal or just get rid of
- it.
-
-* This Valley Belongs to Me: "fully trained" needs a hyphen. "I hope
- however" needs a comma.
-
-* Council in Weldyn: "They need reminding that Wesnoth is too hot for
- them": is this an archaism that I've never heard before? I think of
- this as ghetto slang.
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