On Fri, May 8, 2009 at 7:56 AM, Jussi-Ville Heiskanen <[email protected]> wrote: > Jussi-Ville Heiskanen wrote: >> geni wrote: >>> 2009/5/5 <[email protected]>: >>> >>>> -----Original Message----- >>>> From: FT2 <[email protected]> >>>> To: English Wikipedia <[email protected]> >>>> Sent: Tue, 5 May 2009 12:35 am >>>> Subject: Re: [WikiEN-l] Twitterpedia will win >>>> >>>> Redundant text - "the X war was a war" duh :) Try this: >>>> >>>> "The Peloponnesian War (Ancient Greece, 431-404BC), took place between >>>> Athens and its empire, against the Eponymous League led by Sparta. Rock >>>> on!">> >>>> >>>> --------------------- >>>> Why do you have to state "Ancient Greece" ? And remove "The" >>>> Also "was" is much shorter than "took place" >>>> >>>> "Peloponnesian War (431-404BC), Athens and its empire, against the >>>> Spartan-led Eponymous League." >>>> >>>> >>> >>> "Peloponnesian War (431-404BC), Athens and its empire vs Spartan-led >>> Eponymous League." >>> >>> >> > > "Peloponnesian War (431-404BC), Athenian empire vs. Spartan-led forces."
Who, what, where, when, why, how? Fails to give location of war and result. Was the Delian League an empire or not? Discuss. Is it right to call the Pelopponnesian League "Spartan-led forces"? Should such a summary (for Twitterpedia) be just facts or some opinion as well? Has anyone registered the domain name yet? :-) Carcharoth _______________________________________________ WikiEN-l mailing list [email protected] To unsubscribe from this mailing list, visit: https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/wikien-l
