Sorry, Allen, but all the words are directly from JMB's poems! Bob BrueckL ______________________________________
From: Allen Bramhall <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Date: Wed Jan 18 11:57:24 CST 2006 To: WRYTING-L@LISTSERV.UTORONTO.CA Subject: Re: Yelp [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: >Yelp > > > >Yelp >for a >thigh >rinse > >I cringed >Oh >me! >spree >shot >stormy >plopping > >paginate my >ass cheeks >paginate >my balls > >I luggage I angle I fin >I blister I cramp I corn >I clam I spore I trance >I finger I dung I throat >I mud I wind I behind >I i > >shore >,ah >you >lubes , > >craze >core > >my rump >drug me >scumbags >anus > >skin and lout >the creamed >gash -- puke wince -- >blundered stomach > >what >what >what >what > > > >--Bob BrueckL >(words appropriated from >John M. Bennett poems) > > > I like the short lines, different (so far as I know) from your usual. and even tho you derive this from John's work, the vocabulary is distinctly yours. Allen
