I think what Allen means is that although these words were all found in my poems, the piece sounds very much like you - i agree with this. my poems were just a "dictionary" you used -
onword, john Dr. John M. Bennett Curator, Avant Writing Collection Rare Books & Manuscripts Library The Ohio State University Libraries 1858 Neil Av Mall Columbus, OH 43210 USA (614) 292-3029 [EMAIL PROTECTED] www.johnmbennett.net ----- Original Message ----- From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Date: Wednesday, January 18, 2006 1:03 pm Subject: Re: Yelp > Sorry, Allen, but all the words are directly from JMB's poems! > > Bob BrueckL > ______________________________________ > > > From: Allen Bramhall <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > Date: Wed Jan 18 11:57:24 CST 2006 > To: [email protected] > Subject: Re: Yelp > > [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > > >Yelp > > > > > > > >Yelp > >for a > >thigh > >rinse > > > >I cringed > >Oh > >me! > >spree > >shot > >stormy > >plopping > > > >paginate my > >ass cheeks > >paginate > >my balls > > > >I luggage I angle I fin > >I blister I cramp I corn > >I clam I spore I trance > >I finger I dung I throat > >I mud I wind I behind > >I i > > > >shore > >,ah > >you > >lubes , > > > >craze > >core > > > >my rump > >drug me > >scumbags > >anus > > > >skin and lout > >the creamed > >gash -- puke wince -- > >blundered stomach > > > >what > >what > >what > >what > > > > > > > >--Bob BrueckL > >(words appropriated from > >John M. Bennett poems) > > > > > > > I like the short lines, different (so far as I know) from your usual. > and even tho you derive this from John's work, the vocabulary is > distinctly yours. > > Allen >
