At 4/29/2007 06:04 PM, CK wrote:
<http://working.bushidodeep.com/dom_site/template.php>http://working.bushidodeep.com/dom_site/template.php
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Typography is the emphasis of this creation, so a review for readability is desired. Please send along screen captures of any strange behavior. Concerned with the absolute placement of the navigation and the generated content.


The 'READ MORE' links do not function as hyperlinks using Win Firefox 2 (and of course they don't show up in Internet Explorer 7). Oh, I see, they're not actually links; I assumed they were because the mouse changed to a pointer, but I see that you forced that in your stylesheet. Why?

When I enlarge the text (which I need to do in order to read the 'READ MORE' links), it spills out of the white column background. With a layout this simple, why not make the white column resize with the text?

Also with enlargement, when the text wraps at window width it overlaps the beginning of the body text. Why do you take the nav menu out of the flow? This seems to create problems unnecessarily.

In Win Firefox 2 the validation select list seems too short, cutting off part of the final 'n' of Validation. I can't see where in your stylesheet you're constraining its width, but maybe some padding-right would help.

My eye sees a busy page. I would increase the leading before each DT to let the page breathe.

It's really just a big list, which I don't find interesting; even while reviewing this template I couldn't make myself actually read it. I would consider using a more engaging method of communicating with the reader.

I like your color palette!

Regards,

Paul
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Paul Novitski
Juniper Webcraft Ltd.
http://juniperwebcraft.com


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