Hi Marvin

Good to see you have an interest in web design. This is a great industry
with a lot of friendly competitors.

The JavaScript:
   At the end of each line you need to have semi-colon ;
   Why the three changes to the same element in one call?
   b1 element does not exist

The layout needs work you can find a good tutorial on building a layout
from scratch @
http://net.tutsplus.com/tutorials/design-tutorials/design-and-code-a-slick-website-from-scratch-%E2%80%93-part-i/
 Using the principles in this guide should help you for a much more slicker
looking site.

Other notes:
   You need to make your elements semantic i.e. put the prices in span tags
   e.g.  <span class="price">$3.99</span> and address in
   <address></address> tags
   When you use tables you need to have a heading row which describes the
   column content. This helps with accessibility
   The Bananas in the navigation should be in the CSS as they are layout
   and not content. Try the CSS below

#nav a{
display:block;
height: 60px;
background:url('../images/fruit_banana.jpg') no-repeat;
vertical-align:bottom;
}

   Your site is not Valid XHTML as it states in the bottom right hand
   corner
   Joe's Fruit's address is Anytown
   Contrast really bad, red on dark green when you mouse over a link is not
   a good idea
   On the staff page you have some wonderful imagery of fruit these should
   be incorporated into the front page
   The Mango image is missing


To get you started try this CSS instead (example @
http://createmy.com.au/temp/CropperCapture%5B18%5D.jpg). It is very basic,
once you make your XHTML more semantic you can do a lot more.

@import "http://meyerweb.com/eric/tools/css/reset/reset.css";;

body{
background:#ffffff
url("http://www.sxc.hu/pic/m/t/th/thea0211/1197407__2.jpg";);
font-size:14px;
font-family:arial;
}

#content{
background:#ffffff;
width:960px;
margin:0 auto;
padding:20px;
overflow:hidden;
}

#nav1{
position:absolute;
top: 70px;
}

#nav p{
display:inline;
}

#nav img{
display:none;
}

#nav{
background:#ffffff;
margin:0 auto;
width:960px;
}

h1{
background:#ffffff;
margin:0 auto;
width:960px;
font-size:1.6em;
height:3em;
display:block;
padding:20px;
}

h2{
font-size:1.5em;
}

#content table{
width:660px;
float:left;
border-right:1px #e1e1e1;
margin-right:20px;
}

#content img{
float:right;
}

hr{
display:none;
}


                                         
 Regards,                                
 Dale                                    
                                         
 Dale Hurley                             
 http://createmy.com.au                  
                                         








                                                                                
                                                                
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From: "Ted Drake" <tdr...@yahoo-inc.com>
Date: Mon, 21 Sep 2009 11:50:21 -0700
Subject: RE: [WSG] my latest version of my page

Use semantic markup. The nav should be a list, not a stack of
paragraphs.
Ted


-----Original Message-----
From: li...@webstandardsgroup.org [mailto:li...@webstandardsgroup.org]
On Behalf Of Dave Westell
Sent: Saturday, September 19, 2009 8:37 AM
To: wsg@webstandardsgroup.org
Subject: Re: [WSG] my latest version of my page

Hi Marvin,

OK I now see you are using mouseover () mouseOut() effects...

Your .js script is missing .

http://www.alacorncomputer.com/javascript/fruit.js

Also your page does not validate, you have one too many closing divides
</div> after #nav1

Dave...

----- Original Message -----
From: "Marvin Hunkin" <startrekc...@gmail.com>
To: <wsg@webstandardsgroup.org>
Sent: Saturday, September 19, 2009 7:51 AM
Subject: [WSG] my latest version of my page


> hi.
> well replaced the image for the rollovers.
> take a look at http://startrekcafe.alacorncomputer.com
> cheers Marvin.
> ps: any feedback, good, bad or ugly.
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