Hi Joan,

Just a quick review:

- you should maybe target the users (like in the Tomcat howto) and not the developers. Developers can normally use users' how-tos, but the opposite is often not true.

- describing how to install Jetty is the role of the Jetty folks, not ours. Just point the user to where he/she can find the adequate information.

- How to build Xindice is described in another document (compilation how-to). In general, we should avoid duplicating information at all cost (risk of not synchronized docs).

- explaining how to use Forrest with Jetty should go into the "contributing to the documentation" how-to in the dev section.

hth

-Vladimir

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Vladimir R. Bossicard
Apache Xindice - http://xml.apache.org/xindice



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