--On July 25, 2011 14:52:39 -0700 [email protected] wrote:
Title : Message Submission for Mail
Author(s) : Randall Gellens
John C Klensin
Filename : draft-ietf-yam-rfc4409bis-01.txt
Pages : 21
Date : 2011-07-25
I have reviewed this version of this document. My comments:
Section 1:
o Provide a basis for adding enhanced submission services in the
future
Remove "in the future" as we have now added advanced submission services
such as BURL and FUTURERELEASE. Informational references to those
specifications would be helpful to implementers to show examples of
enhanced submission services.
Section 5.3:
Great improvement, but...
I want to confirm implementers are OK with 2 minutes here -- it's rather
slow from a user interface viewpoint. This may result in _increasing_
timeouts in SMTP client software. One web client I looked at has a 30
second read timeout and a 10 second write timeout (applies to each
send/receive).
Section 7, Table 1:
The wrapping of this table looks really bad. Please investigate ways to fix
it. One ugly option would be to make it ASCII-ART and remove unnecessary
spaces next to dividers. Changing the column name for the "Submission"
column to a shorter word might also help.
Section 7, before last paragraph:
I suggest adding:
[Start-TLS] is the most widely used mechanism at the time this is written
that allows the MUA and MSA to protect message submission integrity and
privacy.
Section 10:
Need to update port 587 registration as noted by others.
Otherwise, this looks great and I think is ready for advancement.
- Chris
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