Chris,

All changes made in -02 except as noted below...

--On Tuesday, 26 July, 2011 16:28 -0400 Chris Newman
<[email protected]> wrote:

> --On July 25, 2011 14:52:39 -0700 [email protected]
> wrote:
>>      Title           : Message Submission for Mail
>>      Author(s)       : Randall Gellens
>>                           John C Klensin
>>      Filename        : draft-ietf-yam-rfc4409bis-01.txt
>...
> Section 7, Table 1:
> 
> The wrapping of this table looks really bad. Please
> investigate ways to fix it. One ugly option would be to make
> it ASCII-ART and remove unnecessary spaces next to dividers.
> Changing the column name for the "Submission" column to a
> shorter word might also help.

Actually, it could probably be improved significantly by using
explicit column widths in the xml2rfc <texttable> element.  I
think I mentioned this in a earlier discussion of the draft, but
I've been reluctant to spend the time to do that, partially
because the RFC Editor is likely to reformat the thing to their
taste and to do so with a formatting tool rather than a generic
markup tool.  What I've now done is to insert an explicit and
visible request to the highly professional and expert RFC Editor
staff to work  on the table, replacing a comment that was in the
XML earlier.  I'm happy to work with them on formatting; I just
don't want to do the work twice and prefer that the experts do
it.

    john



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