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Sangjin Lee commented on YARN-3150:
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Thanks [~gtCarrera9] for your review. I hope the latest version addresses most 
of them. Please note that this is still not final. We're still looking into the 
steps for loading the coprocessor. I'll update the doc when we have the 
contents ready for that.

bq. 1. What does the white box outside the NM stand for? I'm a little bit 
confused by it...
Do you mean the stack of boxes? It is a way to indicate "multiple worker nodes".

bq. 2. In the text I can see we're discussing that currently collectors are 
launched as aux services inside NM. Are we planning to represent this 
relationship in the figure? If not, maybe we can briefly say something to avoid 
confusion on the arrow from NM to the collector.
I added more captions to indicate that the timeline collector is on the node 
that's running the AM, and other (remote) NMs can write to that timeline 
collector. Hopefully the captions make it clearer. I also added a few sentences 
that describe that.

bq. 3. IIUC, the bold arrows in the figure mean write data flow, and the solid 
ones mean read request? Maybe we want a simple legend for this, or explain it 
in the caption?
Good suggestion. I made that change.

bq. For the configuration table, I think we can use bold or italic to mark new 
configs? In this way we don't need a new column?
Another good suggestion. I made that change too.

bq. Because the whole doc is about YARN timeline service, I think it will be 
helpful to say mapreduce.job.emit-timeline-data is in mapred-site?
I added that that property should be in {{mapred-site.xml}}.

bq. Shall we update the YARN-2928 JIRA for this?
I wasn't 100% sure what you meant by this. Did you mean we should update the 
description, add a comment, or?

> [Documentation] Documenting the timeline service v2
> ---------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: YARN-3150
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/YARN-3150
>             Project: Hadoop YARN
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>            Reporter: Zhijie Shen
>            Assignee: Sangjin Lee
>              Labels: yarn-2928-1st-milestone
>         Attachments: TimelineServiceV2.html, YARN-3150-YARN-2928.01.patch, 
> YARN-3150-YARN-2928.02.patch, YARN-3150-YARN-2928.03.patch
>
>
> Let's make sure we will have a document to describe what's new in TS v2, the 
> APIs, the client libs and so on. We should do better around documentation in 
> v2 than v1.



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