Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <[email protected]>
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diff --git a/documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-doc-intro.xml
b/documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-doc-intro.xml
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@@ -9,10 +9,10 @@
<section id='kernel-intro-section'>
<title>Introduction</title>
<para>
- The Yocto Project presents kernels as a fully patched, history-clean
Git
+ The Yocto Project presents kernels as fully-patched, history-clean Git
repositories.
Each repository represents selected features, board support,
- and configurations extensively tested by the Yocto Project.
+ and configurations tested extensively by the Yocto Project.
Yocto Project kernels allow the end user to leverage community
best practices to seamlessly manage the development, build and debug
cycles.
</para>
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