Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <[email protected]>
---
only contentious issue below is whether manual should link directly
to YP BSP page, is that considered a stable page?
diff --git a/documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml
b/documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml
index 9d9aef6..b279455 100644
--- a/documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml
+++ b/documentation/kernel-manual/kernel-how-to.xml
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
in the Yocto Project kernel in any clone of the Yocto Project
kernel source repository
Git tree.
For example, the following command clones the Yocto Project
baseline kernel that
- branched off of <filename>linux.org</filename> version 3.4:
+ branched off of <filename>kernel.org</filename> version 3.4:
<literallayout class='monospaced'>
$ git clone git://git.yoctoproject.org/linux-yocto-3.4
</literallayout>
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@
<para>
The OpenEmbedded build system makes sure these conditions exist
before attempting compilation.
- Other means, however, do exist, such as as bootstrapping a BSP, see
+ Other means, however, do exist, such as bootstrapping a BSP, see
the "<link linkend='workflow-examples'>Workflow Examples</link>".
</para>
@@ -538,9 +538,9 @@
associated with development by using the following
commands:
<literallayout class='monospaced'>
- $ Git add <path>/file
- $ Git commit --amend
- $ Git rebase or Git rebase -i
+ $ git add <path>/file
+ $ git commit --amend
+ $ git rebase or Git rebase -i
</literallayout>
</para>
@@ -843,13 +843,13 @@
by either creating a Git repository (recommended) or
extracting a Yocto Project release
tarball.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><emphasis>Choose an existing BSP available
with the Yocto Project:</emphasis>
- Try to map your board features as closely to the
features of a BSP that is
+ Try to map your board features as closely as possible
to the features of a BSP that is
already supported and exists in the Yocto Project.
Starting with something as close as possible to your
board makes developing
your BSP easier.
You can find all the BSPs that are supported and ship
with the Yocto Project
- on the Yocto Project's Download page at
- <ulink
url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/download'></ulink>.</para></listitem>
+ on the Yocto Project's BSP page at
+ <ulink
url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/downloads/bsp'></ulink>.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para><emphasis>Be sure you have the Base
BSP:</emphasis>
You need to either have a local Git repository of the
base BSP set up or
have downloaded and extracted the files from a release
BSP tarball.
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