Hey Vivek, Why don't you try your hand at some racy, raunchy, limericks??
Nice piece that, however I would have used the word semen instead of milk, my learned freind, especially if you are making allusions to ejaculations of the masturbatory kind. Milk, I believe is best split on the kitchen floor. A small clarification, my last post here landed here because I hit the wrong button and its right destination was Subuhi's inbox. And thanks a lot for your espousal of form and metre. Warm Regards, Anand --- In [email protected], Vivek Narayanan <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Dear Anand and Subuhi, > > Form without personal feeling, for sure, > is an empty vessel, hollow, ungenerous. > It's the bongo drums without the voice or worse, > the marching band pied-pipering people into war. > > But your "feelings"-- without a precise form to hold, carry or > contain them-- are worthless, like the pure mind in space > bereft of a body by which it may be kissed or embraced; > they are spilt milk, ejaculate on the bathroom floor. > > There's absolutely nothing wrong with the latter, > but it might be wise to keep such things to yourself. ------------------------ Yahoo! Groups Sponsor --------------------~--> What would our lives be like without music, dance, and theater? Donate or volunteer in the arts today at Network for Good! http://us.click.yahoo.com/pkgkPB/SOnJAA/Zx0JAA/yqIolB/TM --------------------------------------------------------------------~-> Did you get this mail as a forward? Subscribe by sending a blank mail to [EMAIL PROTECTED], OR, if you have a Yahoo! ID, by visiting http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/join. Members are encouraged to post poetry, their own and others', respond critically to the poems circulated, and participate in discussions. Post via email at [email protected] OR online at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/post. ---theZESTcommunity-------------- [1] ZESTCurrent: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTCurrent/ [2] ZESTEconomics: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTEconomics/ [3] ZESTGlobal: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTGlobal/ [4] ZESTMedia: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTMedia/ [5] ZESTPoets: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/ [6] ZESTCaste: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTCaste/ [7] ZESTAlternative: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTAlternative/ [8] TalkZEST: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/TalkZEST/ Yahoo! Groups Links <*> To visit your group on the web, go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ZESTPoets/ <*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: [EMAIL PROTECTED] <*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to: http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
