On Wed, Mar 29, 2006 at 02:21:05AM +0400, Serge (gentoosiast) Koksharov wrote:
>   Greetings everyone,
>
> As promised, I found and corrected another bunch of typos and other
> inconsistencies in the docs. Apply against the latest CVS sources of
> the 2.5 branch. But that's not all, more will follow when I find time
> to check remaining part of the docs. See you later.

There's a mistake in one of your fixes:

@@ -36,7 +68,7 @@
        * sample.fvwmrc/system.fvwm2rc-sample-1:
        replaced all mentions of `rsh' with `ssh'. rsh is obsolete and
        inherently insecure. We shouldn't teach our users bad things,
-       should we?
+       shouldn't we?

The phrase:  "We shouldn't teach our users bad things, should we?" is the
correct one.  The negation of NOT teaching the users bad things has
already been done.  It is neither correct English or grammatically
correct to say:

"We shouldn't teach our users bad things, shouldn't we?"

I need to review some of your other fixes --- whilst you've made a
fantastic effort in doing so, I can already see one or two technical
mistakes that need changing.  I'll have to apply this patch and somehow
reverse engineer your changes.

But thank you ever so much for your efforts.

-- Thomas Adam

--  
I've been too honest with myself, I should have lied like everybody else.

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