On Thu, Jul 28, 2016 at 3:50 PM, Karan, Cem F CIV USARMY RDECOM ARL (US) <cem.f.karan....@mail.mil> wrote: > "License" shall mean the terms and conditions for use, reproduction, > and distribution as defined by Sections 1 through 9 of this document.
You may want to update the sections count, they're 10 now. > 4. Redistribution. You may reproduce and distribute copies of the > Work or Derivative Works thereof in any medium, with or without > modifications, and in Source or Object form, provided that You > meet the following conditions: I'd suggest to add in clause 4, or in its obligations a)-d), an "if copyright exists" or something similar. If copyright doesn't exist in the Work, can't put enforceable conditions on redistributions. Just wondering: you said that Apache License 2.0 doesn't have a severability clause, and it would have helped your wishes. However you didn't add one. Why not? -- ~ "We like to think of our forums as a Free-Speech Zone. And freedom works best at the point of a bayonet." (Amazon, Inc.) _______________________________________________ License-discuss mailing list License-discuss@opensource.org https://lists.opensource.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/license-discuss