I've put a cut at some reorged release notes here: http://tieguy.org/misc/212releasenotes/index.html
The main rewriting was on the first page, but I reorged the other pages. I'll try to make another pass at these tomorrow, but in the meantime please feel free to read over/critique. If there is consensus that this is better, I'll check them in tomorrow night. One stylistic thing I'd really like to get changed- every image in these has a <b>Figure 1. picture-name-which-is-often-the-same-as-the-section-name </b> above the picture. Can someone with xsl guruness make these blocks more like in davyd's release notes: http://www.gnome.org/~davyd/gnome-2-12/ i.e., no uber-formal-totally-uninformative 'Figure X', and italicized below the image, instead of bolded above the image? I am using the xsl bits in: http://cvs.gnome.org/viewcvs/gnomeweb-wml/docbook_html_style/ to generate the stuff, so that is what the changes would have to be to. Thanks- Luis -- marketing-list mailing list marketing-list@gnome.org http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list