Re: [sidr] Correction re: draft-ietf-sidr-lta-use-cases

2015-04-08 Thread Declan Ma
Karen, This is indeed a better description. And I believe it would be even better if Randy could describe how a local trust anchor” takes effect on different cases. Declan Ma ZDNS Ltd. 在 2015年4月4日,上午2:18,Karen Seo k...@bbn.com 写道: Folks, Here's a better description of Case 3.

Re: [sidr] Correction re: draft-ietf-sidr-lta-use-cases

2015-04-08 Thread Christopher Morrow
could I suggest that: A ... is a bit rough on the reader in sentences like: A wants to re-route traffic from these organizations... A what? a giraffe? oh! Entity-A (or Network-A).. maybe change 'A' to 'Entity-A' or 'Network-A' ? Also there's a sad choice of time to use a pronoun in your