Qin;

You are correct that referring only to the standard does not allow you to refer 
to sub-clauses or pages and line numbers.  

I would propose changing the current text:
" A 10ms time slot length is the default value defined by [IEEE802154e]. 
Section 6.4.3.3.3 of [IEEE802154e] defines a default macTimeslotTemplate, i.e. 
the different duration within the slot. These values are summarized in the 
following table and MUST be used when utilizing the default time slot duration. 
In this case, the Timeslot IE only transports the macTimeslotTemplateId (0x00) 
as the timing values are well known. If a timeslot template other than the 
default is used, the EB MUST contain a complete TimeSlot IE indicating the 
timeslot duration and the corresponding timeslot timings, requiring 25 bytes. 
Note however that in case of discrepancy between the values in this document 
and [IEEE802154e], the IEEE standard specification has precedence.” 

with the following text:
“The timing parameters for the default macTimeslotTemplate (macTsTemplateID = 
0) are summarized in the following table and MUST be used when utilizing the 
default time slot duration. For the case of the default macTimeslotTemplate, 
the Timeslot IE only transports the macTimeslotTemplateId (0x00) as the timing 
values are previously known. If a timeslot template other than the default is 
used, the EB MUST contain a complete TimeSlot IE indicating the timeslot 
duration and the corresponding timeslot timings. Note however that in case of 
discrepancy between the values in this document and IEEE 802.15.4, the IEEE 
standard has precedence.


Pat

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On 30, Apr2015, at 15:34, Qin Wang <[email protected]> wrote:

Hi all,

I understand that reference IEEE 802.15.4 includes IEEE802.15.4e by definition. 
But I have a problem in writing 6TiSCH draft if we remove "e" in reference.  

Here is an example. "A 10ms time slot length is the default value defined by  
[IEEE802154e].  Section 6.4.3.3.3 of [IEEE802154e] defines a default  
macTimeslotTemplate,...." is in the section 3.4 of minimal draft. Then, the 
question is how to point the exact place if we use IEEE 802.15.4 as reference.

Thanks
Qin
 



On Friday, May 1, 2015 12:55 AM, Pat Kinney 
<[email protected]> wrote:


An amendment references (is based upon) the latest revision when it was 
approved, hence 802.15.4e is based upon (i.e. it references) 802.15.4-2011.

Pat
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On 30, Apr2015, at 10:37, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <[email protected] 
<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

Hello Michael

For All I know 4e TSCH is only defined on 2011. There are known similar 
technologies running over 2006 but they are not 4e...

The undated reference in an RFC to an IEEE spec applies to the present state at 
the date of the RFC and to all future versions unless the RFC is revised. 

This proved useful for Ethernet; too much maybe since we were fooled into 
extending IP over Ethernet to Wi-Fi...

Cheers,

Pascal

> Le 30 avr. 2015 à 07:50, Michael Richardson <[email protected] 
> <mailto:[email protected]>> a écrit :
> 
> 
> Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> 
> wrote:
>> Today, undated and without the 'e', IEEE802.15.4 means 2011 plus all
>> the amendments.
> 
> Given that we can't run on 802.15.4-2011, this is why I'm concerned about
> referencing "802.15.4".
> 
>> So, a reference to IEEE Std 802.3 (without year) today is identical to the
>> 2012 dated reference, but when the current revision is approved (expected
>> this year), a reference to the 2012 revision would not include the
>> maintenance changes included in the current revision, nor any of the
>> amendments likely to be approved soon after the revision is approved.
> 
> How does an outsider know when the reference was made?  Is it by the date
> of the document making the reference?
> 
> If the IETF writes a document in 2014, but it doesn't get published in Jan. 
> 2015,
> what IEEE document would "802.15.4" reference?
> 
> Robert suggests text like:
> 
>> In development of this RFC, IEEE Std 802.99 documents considered included
>> IEEE Std 802.99-2016 and P802.99/D8.
> 
> and so if we can do this, then I'm happy.
> 
> 
> 
> 
> --
> Michael Richardson <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>, 
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> 
> 
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