Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- One minor comment: I found it a slight leap in the introduction in the final paragraph ("More detailed, ...") that talks about interoperable specifications (implying that specification is not interoperable) and profiles (where it isn't clear where these have come from). So, an extra sentence to bridge the concepts might be helpful in the introduction. As a nit, the paragraph is also missing a comma in "interoperate while". _______________________________________________ Ace mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace
