Hi Ludwig, LGTM.
Thanks for accommodating my comments. Regards, Rob > -----Original Message----- > From: Seitz Ludwig <[email protected]> > Sent: 16 April 2021 07:30 > To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) <[email protected]>; The IESG <[email protected]> > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: RE: [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace- > oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT) > > Hello Robert, > > Thank you for reviewing this draft. Sorry for the long response time. > > Version -39 addresses your comment, adding a sentence to bridge the > comments as you suggested. > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-39 > > Regards, > > Ludwig > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Robert Wilton via Datatracker <[email protected]> > > Sent: den 25 mars 2021 12:30 > > To: The IESG <[email protected]> > > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected] > > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace- > oauth- > > authz-38: (with COMMENT) > > > > Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for > > draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: No Objection > > > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email > > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory > > paragraph, however.) > > > > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss- > criteria.html > > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz/ > > > > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > COMMENT: > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > One minor comment: I found it a slight leap in the introduction in the > final > > paragraph ("More detailed, ...") that talks about interoperable > specifications > > (implying that specification is not interoperable) and profiles (where > it isn't > > clear where these have come from). So, an extra sentence to bridge the > > concepts might be helpful in the introduction. As a nit, the paragraph > is also > > missing a comma in "interoperate while". > > > > _______________________________________________ Ace mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ace
