Hi Francesca:

On 2021-07-05, at 15:32, Francesca Palombini <[email protected]> 
wrote:
> 
> NEW:
>   There may be use cases were different transport and security protocols

Amazingly, this still says “were” where it needs to say “where”, as if the 
“were” were invisible :-)

>   are allowed for the different interactions, and that corresponds to 
> combining profiles.

“Corresponds to” is weirdly weak, but works here.
But may be we can fully explain that here before the example (which is just an 
example):

NEWNEW:
>   , and, if that is not explicitly covered by an existing profile, it 
> corresponds to combining profiles into a new one.


And then we can continue with the example.

>   For example, a new profile could define that a previously-defined MQTT-TLS 
> profile is used between the
>   client and the RS in combination with a previously-defined CoAP-DTLS 
> profile for
>   interactions between the client and the AS. It is REQUIRED of the new 
> profile to specify the 
>   combination and to make sure interoperability and security properties are 
> achieved.

The last sentence is kind of obvious (I hope that the same applies to 
non-combined profiles), but Section 6.7 is short, so a little superfluity does 
not hurt.

Grüße, Carsten

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