Saul asks, "i'm curious if anyone here has any insights
>> into the aesthetics of incompleteness..."

In a message dated 8/30/12 6:34:57 PM, [email protected] writes:

> No representation is "finished"
>
I'm with Michael on this. The phrase "the aesthetics of incompleteness"  is
a grandiloquent failure.   The most constant and demanding question facing
any writer -- of novels, plays, poems, even essays -- is "What to put in and
what to leave out."   The ultimate product is the result of compromises
between two faculties in the writer: imagination and sensibility. Imagination
offers, sensibility judges. Imagination's focus is never on incompleteness
(except as a theme; more on that in a moment); imagination is driven to supply
suggestions -- "How 'bout this? How 'bout this?" Sensibility decides if the
offered bit contributes to the desired effect on the reader/viewer.

Strangely, and despite all the preachments in books by how-to-write gurus,
the form of a good sensibility's question never is, "Is it necessary?"   For
example, the most frequent of the fiction-guru's test-questions for
"necessity" is: "Does it advance the plot/story?" But the six or seven most
memorable chapters in the world's fiction-literature do nothing to advance the
plot.   The inspired authors imagined them, and sensibility allowed their
inclusion, because they had a desirable effect.

Incompleteness is merely a residue; it's inevitable. It is never in itself
a goal. The only time it crosses the mind of a creator is, lets's say,
during the consideration of "unanswered questions". In the movie "Four
Weddings
and a Funeral", we are not told the daytime jobs of a single character
because in the opinion of the sensibility of the writer, Richard Curtis, they
would be a distracting irrelevancy.

But other times a writer may decide that not including certain info would
leave unsuppressible and distracting questions in the viewer's mind.
(Curtis's movie was a failure in Japan, where, apparently, the great majority
of
people have a need-to-know feeling about what a person does for a living. This
is bit comparable to the attitude of Victorian grande dames toward
backgrounds and lineage: "Yes, dear, I know you're fond of him, but who IS
he?")

Of course, sometimes there is a sense of "incompleteness" sought by the
author -- as in, say, a mystery, where whodunit is intentionally withheld --
for a while. And there are even certain narrow stories where the
fascination/attractiveness of a character lies in her being a man or woman of
mystery:
Don't try to "explain" her; she is inexplicable. Such stories had better be
quite short.

I myself have been at work on a play that, for more than a year, was titled
INCOMPLETENESS. The central character is writing an academic writing a
paper, "Incompleteness Theorem for Language"; but in the play the important
"incompleteness" is reflected in the lives of almost all of us. But that kind
of
incompleteness has little to do with "aesthetics".

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