On Fri, May 24, 2013 at 8:33 AM, Charles Walker
<[email protected]> wrote:
>       A party is a type of second-class person and a player.

What happens if one is deregistered?

>      A player CAN flip eir party membership by
>      announcement, provided that e satisfies any conditions for doing
>      so in the constitutions of the prior party (if any) and the new
>      party (if any).

Best to include "determinate" somewhere, ditto all the rest of the
places where the constitution is authorizing something.

>      Each party has a constitution, which must contain its name and
>      any conditions for joining and leaving the party; it CAN be
>      amended by any of its members without objection from another
>      member.

What happens if it's amended to not contain a name?

>      Party members SHALL obey eir party's constitution.

their

>      Party members SHOULD vote according to eir party's Whip on an
>      Agoran decision. If ey fail to do so, ey SHALL transfer the
>      relevant Rebellion Fine (if any) to eir party in a timely manner
>      afterwards.

they, their

>       For an Agoran decision with an adoption index the party of the
>       proposal's author and the Whips of each party, if any, on the
>       proposal are essential parameters.

This should only apply to decisions to adopt proposals.

>       a) Majority Leader. The Majority Leader CAN veto a specified
>          ordinary decision in its voting period by announcement; this
>          increases its Adoption Index by 1.

As many times as e wants?

>       b) Minority Leader. The Minority Leader CAN filibuster a
>          specified ordinary decision in its voting period by
>          announcement; this makes it Democratic and sets its quorum to
>          half the number of eligible voters, except if that would
>          decrease the quorum, Rules to the contrary notwithstanding.

Should reword to clarify that this is a persistent redefinition of
quorum rather than an attempt at instantaneous change.

I'd rather have a rubberstamp than two different forms of veto.

>       c) Chief Whip. The Chief Whip's voting limit on an Ordinary
>          decision is 1.5 times what it would otherwise be.

Rounded?

>      3) Each eligible voter's voting limit is what it would be on an
>         Ordinary decision initiated at the same time, and can be
>         changed in the same manner as on an Ordinary decision, except
>         that the decision cannot be made Democratic.

Yuck.  I'd rather make all decisions possess Chamber.

>       Upon the resolution of this decision, if the outcome is a party
>       leader, and e got more votes than all other party leaders
>       combined, e becomes the Speaker.

I would redefine outcome instead.


In general, I'm not sure if there are enough active players to make
this work well (unlike in, say, BlogNomic), but we could certainly
try.

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